Sunday, May 15, 2005
EXCERPTS FROM CONNIE'S WRITING DIARY
9:33 a.m.- I crack my knuckles and types the words, “The little kid hit the glass window of the refrigeration unit with an audible splat.”
Damn. That’s good. Visceral. Intriguing. I can work with this. I go and fix myself a mimosa to celebrate the dawn of a new writing day in my career.
10:17 a.m.-I’ve been on the phone listening to my great-uncle describe his impetigo, but now I’ve returned sans mimosa (I poured it out halfway through Phil’s description of erupting blisters.) I stare at my sentence and make a little change,
“The brat hit the refrigeration unit’s glass wall on a dead run.”
Hm. Better. This is a more concise image. You understand that this isn’t a “little” window, it is a “viewing...” Hey!
“The brat hit the viewing window on a dead run.”
“The brat approached the refrigeration unit on a dead run, hitting the viewing window with an audible splat.”
Shit. Shit, shit, shit. I look up. Look at that. Time for lunch.
11:11 a.m.- Yesterday was just a test run. TODAY is the day I am really starting that novel. I am in a celebratory mood. This may have something to do with the mimosa already in my hand, but I’m willing to go with the general festive and confident mood it has inspired.
Besides I already see the problem with that first sentence. I fix it.
“The brat darted from the crowd surrounding the National Butter Association’s revolving Butter Sculpting Studio on a dead run and hit the glass wall with an audible splat.”
That’s good. I’d been missing that splat. So good in fact, I call a friend to read this fabulous first line and bask in her approval. She responds, “Kids, even brats, don’t splat.”
Shit. She’s right. I look up. It’s past lunch.
3:40 p.m. -Okay, Okay. I’ve been busy. But is it any wonder I haven’t been able to really invest myself in this process when I’ve had things like dry- cleaning the winter coats and setting up this damn blog and drawing chicken bodies hanging over my head?! But now everything is under control. I can really concentrate on my writing.
“The kid darted from the crowd surrounding Butter Sculpture Studio and hit the window on a dead run, shaking the refrigerated unit from its two by four foundation.”
“The kid shot from—"
The email rings and a window pops up on my desktop. It’s a note from Eloisa demanding, yet again, a new head for her chicken. Drat Eloisa.
6:55 p.m. -Screw the kid and screw the refrigerator. I’m going to make a cheesecake.
10:48 p.m. -I finish the last of the cheesecake. Thus revitalized, I plop myself down in front of the monitor.
“ ‘And you were once a Butter Princess,’ the judge whispered in a theatrically lowered voice.”
“ ‘And to think,’ the judge shook her head, ‘you were once a Butter Princess.’ ”
Yes. Yes, yes. This is a much better place to open. I am pleased. But if I changed...
“ ‘And you call yourself a Butter Princess.’ The judge’s eyes narrowed— "
Hold the phone. This is not a romance novel. My characters eyes do not narrow anymore. Or do they...?!
The phone rings. It is Eloisa. She is most strident. She insists she neds a new chicken head. I am going to bed.
9:00 a.m.-I have worked on my new novel for ten days. I have written one sentence. Normally this would motivate me to write, but it is Sunday. I shouldn't really be working on Sunday. God wouldn't like it.
I turn off the computer, wondering if this rationale is going to come back and bite me in the ass. Right in front of the Pearly Gates.